As you develop this scene, remember to use narrators to help explain situations or characters' thoughts when appropriate!
Also, put parentheses ( ) around stage direction or notes about characters' facial expressions, tone of voice, etc.
Hiding from Skyla:
Narrator- Naomi and Owen were as scarred as two kittens without an owner, right after Skyla slapped Naomi. They both ran away as fast as their feet could go trying to get away from their crazy mother their hearts beat as fast as light and their hands trembled.
Skyla yells (in a screaming voice) - Naomi, Owen I know you guys are hiding in the grove so when you feel like running out to eat or drink your gonna get it!
(Naomi and Owen run from one end of the auditorium to the other) (then once they get to the end of the auditorium they tell Gram, Bernardo, and Fabiola everything that just happend)
Owen- Skyla is after us she is trying to bring Naomi to Las Vegas and not me she says Naomi better go or else and she says she can hurt you Gramp or even sue you if Naomi doest go with her and and... Naomi doesnt want to go and Skyla says sh-sh-she better go or else but Gramp what does " or else"and then S-S-Skyla slaped Naomi really hard! After that we ran away from Skyla!
Naomi-(acts like if sobbing) G-g-gramp why is Skyla like this. I-I wanted a ca-aring M-mom not a mom l-like S-skyla, who only wants m-me to be in Vegas with her s-so she could get m-money aand s-so I could babysit S-s-Saphire.
Bernardo-Dont worry Gramp, Fabiola, and I will take care of you guys. Theres no reason to be scared just breath in and out.
Narrator- So bernardo,Gramp, and Fabiola came up with a marvelous plan to stop Skyla and keep Owen and Naomi safe.
Fabiola-Kid's go in the garage and hide just calm down.
(top was by Dogs998)
Bernardo-(takes the children and goes to the side of Gramp, then leaves the children at the shed and gets a very large shovel.)
Skyla- Naomi!
(Bernardo, Fabiola, and Gramp form a blockade around the shed)
(Skyla comes out)
Skyla- hello, can I please see Naomi for a sec?
Gramp- No. You are not going anywhere with these children.
Skyla- (In a louder angry voice) I can do whatever I want with MY children! Even if you don't let me have them, I could just call the Police and take the away! (In a nicer, sweet voice) You don't want that to happen do you?
Gramp-You've been drinking havnt you?!?!?
Skyla-maybe, but it's none of your buisness! Now let me see sweet litle Naomi and Owen.
Bernardo-(moves foward with his shovel)
Fabiola-Just leave these kids alone they deserve to enjoy their life, just go back to were you came from and leave this sweet children with
Also, put parentheses ( ) around stage direction or notes about characters' facial expressions, tone of voice, etc.
Hiding from Skyla:
Narrator- Naomi and Owen were as scarred as two kittens without an owner, right after Skyla slapped Naomi. They both ran away as fast as their feet could go trying to get away from their crazy mother their hearts beat as fast as light and their hands trembled.
Skyla yells (in a screaming voice) - Naomi, Owen I know you guys are hiding in the grove so when you feel like running out to eat or drink your gonna get it!
(Naomi and Owen run from one end of the auditorium to the other) (then once they get to the end of the auditorium they tell Gram, Bernardo, and Fabiola everything that just happend)
Owen- Skyla is after us she is trying to bring Naomi to Las Vegas and not me she says Naomi better go or else and she says she can hurt you Gramp or even sue you if Naomi doest go with her and and... Naomi doesnt want to go and Skyla says sh-sh-she better go or else but Gramp what does " or else"and then S-S-Skyla slaped Naomi really hard! After that we ran away from Skyla!
Naomi-(acts like if sobbing) G-g-gramp why is Skyla like this. I-I wanted a ca-aring M-mom not a mom l-like S-skyla, who only wants m-me to be in Vegas with her s-so she could get m-money aand s-so I could babysit S-s-Saphire.
Bernardo-Dont worry Gramp, Fabiola, and I will take care of you guys. Theres no reason to be scared just breath in and out.
Narrator- So bernardo,Gramp, and Fabiola came up with a marvelous plan to stop Skyla and keep Owen and Naomi safe.
Fabiola-Kid's go in the garage and hide just calm down.
(top was by Dogs998)
Bernardo-(takes the children and goes to the side of Gramp, then leaves the children at the shed and gets a very large shovel.)
Skyla- Naomi!
(Bernardo, Fabiola, and Gramp form a blockade around the shed)
(Skyla comes out)
Skyla- hello, can I please see Naomi for a sec?
Gramp- No. You are not going anywhere with these children.
Skyla- (In a louder angry voice) I can do whatever I want with MY children! Even if you don't let me have them, I could just call the Police and take the away! (In a nicer, sweet voice) You don't want that to happen do you?
Gramp-You've been drinking havnt you?!?!?
Skyla-maybe, but it's none of your buisness! Now let me see sweet litle Naomi and Owen.
Bernardo-(moves foward with his shovel)
Fabiola-Just leave these kids alone they deserve to enjoy their life, just go back to were you came from and leave this sweet children with